Ifer's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bobjora's Mask]

TL;DL

Too long; didn't like. You say that this flash wasn't short enough to put into a collaboration. The solution is to shrink it to a maximum of a quarter of the size.

Because there isn't much action going on (and what is there is on repeat), the viewer easily becomes bored. The best way to compensate for a lack of content is to make it correspondingly short.

[Where The Lilies Bloom]

Sound sucks

Not bad, but I'd suggest either using a less ear-bleedingly bad voice synthesizer, or recording the audio itself.

qrs22 responds:

I know. :(

[LOTR 2009]

Okay, hard to hear.

Bit too quiet

[Ninjas I]

Needs sound

Not bad, but I suggest adding sound and lowering the frame rate for the action sequences; it does a bit too fast to really comprehend what's happening.

[waki miko reimu]

Pretty good

Where'd you get the song? I really like it!

k3ltr0n responds:

its by iosys called waki miko reimu!! :D

[Puppets in the Park VIII]

Good graphics, bad story.

While you've done a nice job of making the puppets, you really need to work on your storytelling; both the story itself and the delivery are quite dry and boring.

[Bimmy ep.1 part 2]

Decent

The robots are a bit hard to understand, and the pacing's a bit slow, but this is pretty good otherwise. Your microphone is really good!

ThyGentleman responds:

Yeah its only running on 16 fps...the next ones going to be better. Thanks im actually using a laptop micophone so thats pretty surprising you think that its good. I never really did...

[Nur Gift]

Audio lacking

No sound?

[LOZ UO trailer]

Good!

I've really liked the LOZ UO series so far. Keep up the good work! While this trailer is admittedly old, I really like the music used; would you mind revealing the artist and title? :)

[War over worlds]

Pretty good.

I like that you let the protagonist get beat up. Most authors don't. I'd suggest not using stick people, nor that DBZ hairstyle. There are several scenes that go too slow and take too long. They would be much more enjoyable if there was some kind of music or something happening to distract the audience. Overall, though, it was a decent movie. I liked it.