Good
Was pretty good but the music didn't really seem to go with the video much.
Good
Was pretty good but the music didn't really seem to go with the video much.
Yeah, its more of a tiny story with music behind it :)
Pretty good, voices need work
The animation is beautiful, and the plot's intruiging, but I suggest investing in some better quality mics and practicing your voiceacting a bit.
Good
Very good, but the audio quality is a bit lacking. Static-y.
Pretty good, still needs work.
Your animation and sound work are spot on. Well done.
The voices, acting, art, dialogue and jokes could use a bit of fine tuning, though.
If you're doing all the work yourself, may I suggest finding a collaborator or mentor help you with your problem areas while you focus on perfecting your strong points?
Great! Couple of requests:
Could you add a scene selection? And maybe links to the songs?
Great!
One problem: it should prbably be "sudden-onset", not "sudden, onset."
Nice
Very good aimation and synching, decent choreography. Work on adding plot and improving your art.
Decent
Are the Red vs Blue similarities intentional?
Good
Would probably have even more impact without the voice.
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